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Impre / Score ： 36 / 15 2003/03/16(Sun) 18:08:13
Id：A3#Sg5g5p.SA8~ rev |
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Estimate：1 山崎篤史
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>>HP
As a musical piece, it may be the minimum level. However, the thing "music" is "enjoying sound", and in the stage of the beginning of composition, if it is "were able to enjoy the music of you itself", it will think that it is good. He should study an improvement, a base, a melody, etc. of a drum. Although it seems that the evaluation by BJ5 is severe, it prays improvement in your future composition capability, and presents it 1 point!! なんか、コレを日本語翻訳に掛けたら意味不明に…。（滝汗 |
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Estimate：0 有明
>>HP
Since the atmosphere of a train is felt exactly, I likes the beginning of music. However, evaluating is difficult for the portion after the beginning. Whether rhythm is minced or not has many doubtful portions and it is hard to hold the whole music image. Please play several times before announcing BMS which you manufactured. Furthermore, it recommends polishing music. However, your courage which participates in the event in other countries is praised. Manufacture of BMS, it was tired with labor!! …I am sorry to be poor at English. |
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Estimate：1 任那伽耶＠彷徨旅人
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>>HP
んー個性的というか何というか独特な味が。 もし「電車の曲」を作るのなら、振動音だけでなく 風の音も加えてやったほうが良いですね。 そのほうが電車のイメージが出るでしょう。 というわけで１点です。がんばってください。 (This is individual music. But , If you want to compose "Trains's Music" , I think that it is better to add not only vibration but the sound of a wind. Then , the atmosphere of a train surely comes out. I give you one point. Please do youe best. Thank you!) |
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Estimate：0 Kappe
Please understand that it may be strange English since translation service is used. First, a basic melody thinks that it is insufficient. On the whole, it was [ like / which put buzzer sound ? in order ] audible. I combine various sound to a slight degree, or think it good to consider a melody. （エキサイト翻訳使用…。＾＾；） |
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Estimate：0 snowdrop
sorry,I can't understand this BMS. I think this has interesting sounds,but the combination of sounds isn't good. and,I want you to consider the pleasure of hitting(performing) as BMS. Please keep going after this. We give a welcome to you and other foreign BMS creater. |